Comments on: how easily you overlook the 1st of march in croyde

By: Brad

Brad — Mon, 22 Dec 2008 04:35:00 +0000

That is lovely. I saw the reel playing behind my eyes, and the closing stanza is heart breaking.

By: medicatedlady

medicatedlady — Tue, 09 Dec 2008 09:26:29 +0000

Tangible sadness. Memories that still have a bite to them.

And at the heart of it: the speaker will always know what he’ll be having. Will he ever know how much she knew him? And does he know what she’d be having in a cafe in her own world right now?

By: cocoyea

cocoyea — Sat, 06 Dec 2008 22:37:10 +0000

Completely beautiful.

By: onevisit

onevisit — Wed, 03 Dec 2008 00:50:05 +0000

I’m a little jealous of some of your linquistic snap shots.

By: Paul Squires

Paul Squires — Tue, 02 Dec 2008 21:32:13 +0000

It is perfect, Ebby.

By: artpredator

artpredator — Tue, 02 Dec 2008 07:35:46 +0000

wow, that last stanza is amazing, esp that bit with the eyelash

i have pie to go with the coffee

By: Narnie

Narnie — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 16:55:46 +0000

Feelings are good, even if they are a little numbed. Coffee?

By: beeskiffle

beeskiffle — Sun, 30 Nov 2008 20:58:01 +0000

He read it. He could not tell if it was happy or sad. This is how I felt when I wrote it, so I suppose that is fine.

By: Darren King

Darren King — Sun, 30 Nov 2008 19:11:43 +0000

I found your blog through Poetric Grin and I’m enjoying your work very much. I like the autobiographical nature of your work…your narrative style is enticing to the reader – I want to get to the next line, there is an implication from each line that this is going somewhere – as it did in this poem – and in that consistency from poem to poem, you gain a reader’s trust (so to speak)…thanks for sharing. Best, Darren King

By: Mary P

Mary P — Sun, 30 Nov 2008 07:35:57 +0000

Perfect sound, emotion – it sings. It made me feel sad but that’s good too right? Yeppers. It’s a wonderful poem Ebby, xxx