Comments on: a better way to spend lunch http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/27/a-better-way-to-spend-lunch/ here is my heliometer, measuring quietly in words Fri, 25 Dec 2009 18:47:01 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Paul Squires http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/27/a-better-way-to-spend-lunch/#comment-283 Paul Squires Fri, 28 Nov 2008 09:40:36 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=99#comment-283 "no" and "hat" my darling niece? Was this magic? Yes it was before the most subtle and perfect turnaround ending ever. The concrete truth is irrelevant because whatever happened, those two words perfectly, in a way beyond any human logical thinking process are absolutely perfect. I am sorry to mess up your comment box again, but you know, I think better out loud. The forcing of grammar on me is good but your mind is so languagely gifted. This comment will self destruct in 10, 9, 8, (I have a new rule, all my comments are deletable and editable but I want to say these things in public so that they are true.) “no” and “hat” my darling niece? Was this magic? Yes it was before the most subtle and perfect turnaround ending ever. The concrete truth is irrelevant because whatever happened, those two words perfectly, in a way beyond any human logical thinking process are absolutely perfect. I am sorry to mess up your comment box again, but you know, I think better out loud. The forcing of grammar on me is good but your mind is so languagely gifted. This comment will self destruct in 10, 9, 8, (I have a new rule, all my comments are deletable and editable but I want to say these things in public so that they are true.)

]]> By: Paul Squires http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/27/a-better-way-to-spend-lunch/#comment-282 Paul Squires Fri, 28 Nov 2008 01:00:52 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=99#comment-282 Hmm, well. It is a wonderful portrait poem, the character full of subtle life. The use of words/the scrabble game gives the work a selfawareness and depth and the ending is beautifully sensibubble, friends if you don't have tea, almost Winnie The Pooh its naive wisdom. But more than that is Ebby and hence perfectly wonderful and real and much much more than it appears to be. Hmm, well. It is a wonderful portrait poem, the character full of subtle life. The use of words/the scrabble game gives the work a selfawareness and depth and the ending is beautifully sensibubble, friends if you don’t have tea, almost Winnie The Pooh its naive wisdom. But more than that is Ebby and hence perfectly wonderful and real and much much more than it appears to be.

]]> By: Narnie http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/27/a-better-way-to-spend-lunch/#comment-281 Narnie Thu, 27 Nov 2008 22:32:16 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=99#comment-281 Woohoo! I'm the first to comment! Yay!! Okay, compose myself and type quickly before *he* finds it, haha. Oh oh oh this is so lovely and happy and perfect. Your joy is spread through every word holding hands with her joy. It is PERFECT! I am so so so lucky to be able to read your work. Do you realise that? Eh? Well, you really should, xxx Dammit, I think you are amazing. He can say all the clever stuff now whilst I scurry away. Woohoo! I’m the first to comment! Yay!! Okay, compose myself and type quickly before *he* finds it, haha.

Oh oh oh this is so lovely and happy and perfect. Your joy is spread through every word holding hands with her joy. It is PERFECT! I am so so so lucky to be able to read your work. Do you realise that? Eh? Well, you really should, xxx Dammit, I think you are amazing.

He can say all the clever stuff now whilst I scurry away.

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