Comments on: We could walk the dogs, if you like. http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/21/we-could-walk-the-dogs-if-you-like/ here is my heliometer, measuring quietly in words Fri, 25 Dec 2009 18:47:01 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: poeticgrin http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/21/we-could-walk-the-dogs-if-you-like/#comment-277 poeticgrin Wed, 26 Nov 2008 21:14:40 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=96#comment-277 I believe you may be the most creative poet I've come across in... in... forever? You are pushing me to experiment with styles not my own. I adore this poem. I adore your fearless creative blaze. I would pay to read your work. You are the poster child for the contemporary poet. I believe you may be the most creative poet I’ve come across in… in… forever?

You are pushing me to experiment with styles not my own.

I adore this poem. I adore your fearless creative blaze.

I would pay to read your work.

You are the poster child for the contemporary poet.

]]> By: beeskiffle http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/21/we-could-walk-the-dogs-if-you-like/#comment-276 beeskiffle Sat, 22 Nov 2008 18:11:40 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=96#comment-276 I don't know what my mouth was thinking..... I'm going to invest in razor wire. x I don’t know what my mouth was thinking….. I’m going to invest in razor wire. x

]]> By: Narnie http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/21/we-could-walk-the-dogs-if-you-like/#comment-275 Narnie Sat, 22 Nov 2008 17:57:16 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=96#comment-275 Damn those heart beasts. Can't we get them neutered? Surely that would solve a lot of problems, ha! Beautiful, Ebby, xxx Damn those heart beasts. Can’t we get them neutered? Surely that would solve a lot of problems, ha! Beautiful, Ebby, xxx

]]> By: Paul Squires http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/21/we-could-walk-the-dogs-if-you-like/#comment-274 Paul Squires Fri, 21 Nov 2008 21:40:02 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=96#comment-274 Rendered speechless again by the wondrous perfection of your boisterous heart poem, Ebby. Rendered speechless again by the wondrous perfection of your boisterous heart poem, Ebby.

]]> By: AB http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/21/we-could-walk-the-dogs-if-you-like/#comment-273 AB Fri, 21 Nov 2008 15:19:20 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=96#comment-273 The variation in syantax, the mythical alteration of fonts, the fantastic pauses in punctuation, the sheer verbal effort to spell the onamaetopic ...leaves many options to pause, shout, giggle, stutter, become challenged, and reflect --reading as the writing's speech... The snow has extenalised a motion and internalised another affected. Man's trusted friend as the sniffer, wagger and the misser (misery[ier]) offers a symptom...(felt) The opening and the closing, loudly onamaetopic leaves an insight of armour, as the figurative content(ment). The last line seems to be a cliche as: chink in the armour of verse. The variation in syantax, the mythical alteration of fonts, the fantastic pauses in punctuation, the sheer verbal effort to spell the onamaetopic …leaves many options to pause, shout, giggle, stutter, become challenged, and reflect –reading as the writing’s speech…

The snow has extenalised a motion and internalised another affected. Man’s trusted friend as the sniffer, wagger and the misser (misery[ier]) offers a symptom…(felt)

The opening and the closing, loudly onamaetopic leaves an insight of armour, as the figurative content(ment). The last line seems to be a cliche as: chink in the armour of verse.

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