Comments on: An extract from Lorelie and the inspiration behind it. http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/12/an-extract-from-lorelie-and-the-inspiration-behind-it/ here is my heliometer, measuring quietly in words Fri, 25 Dec 2009 18:47:01 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: cocoyea http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/12/an-extract-from-lorelie-and-the-inspiration-behind-it/#comment-270 cocoyea Sun, 16 Nov 2008 18:06:19 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=89#comment-270 I can feel the pulse in every line. I can feel the urgency. Great just great. Also, btw, I thought the first Matrix was the best of all. Thanks. I can feel the pulse in every line. I can feel the urgency. Great just great.

Also, btw, I thought the first Matrix was the best of all. Thanks.

]]> By: Narnie http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/12/an-extract-from-lorelie-and-the-inspiration-behind-it/#comment-267 Narnie Thu, 13 Nov 2008 22:41:35 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=89#comment-267 Splash! Look what you've done, ha! Sound, movement, twirls and excitement, how wonderful. Ebby, it feels so good even though it maybe shouldn't. I know it's not good saying more, more but look at the playful joy and angst and how they turn into art and wonder for others (and you?)... I so hope you turn onto your back and gaze at the sky as you float some more, passing it our way. (nag, nag, such a nag I am... but just to tell you, some of your stories and poems are imprinted on my brain, so strong they were, and I miss them.) Splash! Look what you’ve done, ha! Sound, movement, twirls and excitement, how wonderful. Ebby, it feels so good even though it maybe shouldn’t. I know it’s not good saying more, more but look at the playful joy and angst and how they turn into art and wonder for others (and you?)… I so hope you turn onto your back and gaze at the sky as you float some more, passing it our way.
(nag, nag, such a nag I am… but just to tell you, some of your stories and poems are imprinted on my brain, so strong they were, and I miss them.)

]]> By: artpredator http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/12/an-extract-from-lorelie-and-the-inspiration-behind-it/#comment-265 artpredator Thu, 13 Nov 2008 17:26:19 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=89#comment-265 this really sings! is this from a much larger piece? it is truly lovely--hard to point one part over the others--i love how it builds to the last 3 lines! this really sings!

is this from a much larger piece?

it is truly lovely–hard to point one part over the others–i love how it builds to the last 3 lines!

]]> By: Sumedh http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/12/an-extract-from-lorelie-and-the-inspiration-behind-it/#comment-262 Sumedh Thu, 13 Nov 2008 13:26:58 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=89#comment-262 only the word "lovely" comes to my mind, because my mind has been numbed by this beautiful piece. and even that word doesn't seem to do it any justice. only the word “lovely” comes to my mind, because my mind has been numbed by this beautiful piece. and even that word doesn’t seem to do it any justice.

]]> By: Paul http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/11/12/an-extract-from-lorelie-and-the-inspiration-behind-it/#comment-260 Paul Wed, 12 Nov 2008 20:43:35 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=89#comment-260 Your poetry always seems to exist at the margin between two realms of being, it entices from one to the other and back again. This beautiful poem is a wonderful example, as Lorelie crosses that boundary herself. Your poetry always seems to exist at the margin between two realms of being, it entices from one to the other and back again. This beautiful poem is a wonderful example, as Lorelie crosses that boundary herself.

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