Comments on: oh ma achin’heart

By: poeticgrin

poeticgrin — Wed, 26 Nov 2008 21:16:43 +0000

WHO ARE YOU???? Where did you come from? I am in love with your poetic voice!

You’ve got “it.”

By: cocoyea

cocoyea — Tue, 18 Nov 2008 21:11:17 +0000

Damn this is incredible. Sorry but sometimes you just have to say damn. It feels like a song, a blues song or something.

By: artpredator

artpredator — Thu, 13 Nov 2008 17:29:53 +0000

very very cool…and the last lines are very warm!

By: Narnie

Narnie — Sun, 09 Nov 2008 09:53:26 +0000

to tangle or to tango… hmmmm. Dance partners aren’t that hard to come by (with an uh and an uh, and a uh uh uh) but an entanglement of arms and trust are much harder. Liking the strong voice and the melancholy fire burning on. Very much. xxx

By: randall

randall — Sat, 08 Nov 2008 02:17:44 +0000

I cried in the pees as well, just last night. Nice work.

By: Paul

Paul — Sat, 08 Nov 2008 00:17:02 +0000

Oh you are most welcome. And your Orchid Room poem is perfect too. I have never seen Mamu with such a grin,

By: beeskiffle

beeskiffle — Fri, 07 Nov 2008 23:23:38 +0000

thank you so much
have you seen the auto-generated links at the bottom?
you can put it in the Orchid Room if you would like to.

I’m going through a musical phase of song and voice and it just falls from my my head to the pen and i don’t won’t edit because I choose not to. I wonder what will happen.

You are so kind to always comment. Thank you, uncle.

By: Paul

Paul — Fri, 07 Nov 2008 22:27:39 +0000

Argrg, the commenting Ebby first dilemma. It is unutterably gorgeously wonderful, Ebby. You are the best poet on the planet. I could go on and point at all the things I love about this poem but it would the whole thing deconstructed which is no point because the point is the inexplicable joy that reading your poetry sends through me,