Comments on: april 18th http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/04/18/april-18th/ here is my heliometer, measuring quietly in words Sat, 17 Oct 2009 20:51:29 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Jade http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/04/18/april-18th/#comment-201 Jade Sat, 24 May 2008 14:13:09 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=44#comment-201 "weed buckets lure into her hellish mouth", "spring makes a mockery of her" & on & on, your vision is remarkable “weed buckets lure into her hellish mouth”,
“spring makes a mockery of her” & on & on,
your vision is remarkable

]]> By: Rachel http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/04/18/april-18th/#comment-182 Rachel Fri, 25 Apr 2008 18:12:09 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=44#comment-182 Stunning! How long have I known you, and I never knew. You are an equisite wordsmith. Please don't ever stop writing, because you find the expressions and syntax that escape me every time. In your poetry I find my emotions and vulnerability. You make the hairs stand up on the back of my neck, beautiful contruction, restrained yet utterly emotive. An amazing grasp of our extensive and complex language. I don't know what else to say..........xx Stunning! How long have I known you, and I never knew. You are an equisite wordsmith. Please don’t ever stop writing, because you find the expressions and syntax that escape me every time. In your poetry I find my emotions and vulnerability. You make the hairs stand up on the back of my neck, beautiful contruction, restrained yet utterly emotive. An amazing grasp of our extensive and complex language. I don’t know what else to say……….xx

]]> By: Paul http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/04/18/april-18th/#comment-180 Paul Sun, 20 Apr 2008 10:02:53 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=44#comment-180 powerful and clear, a study in greys, powerful and clear, a study in greys,

]]> By: rick mobbs http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/04/18/april-18th/#comment-179 rick mobbs Sat, 19 Apr 2008 06:10:18 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=44#comment-179 yes, it moved me too. and yes, one foot in front of the other we walk through it. yes, it moved me too. and yes, one foot in front of the other we walk through it.

]]> By: me http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/04/18/april-18th/#comment-178 me Fri, 18 Apr 2008 22:57:49 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=44#comment-178 those hands give love and hugs and hope, you know. Yes, they do. And the heart is wrapped up safe with all the good things inside still. And the mind is shuffling all those bad, bad things waiting until they find the right slot to fit perfectly into 'archive' rather than 'pending'... shit, gotta critique the poem though? It moved me. It made me feel a slight knot in my throat. I think, therefore, that it is a very very strong poem. I think the person that wrote it is admirable. Truly, I do. those hands give love and hugs and hope, you know. Yes, they do. And the heart is wrapped up safe with all the good things inside still. And the mind is shuffling all those bad, bad things waiting until they find the right slot to fit perfectly into ‘archive’ rather than ‘pending’…

shit, gotta critique the poem though? It moved me. It made me feel a slight knot in my throat. I think, therefore, that it is a very very strong poem. I think the person that wrote it is admirable. Truly, I do.

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