Comments on: three rings http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/03/14/three-rings/ here is my heliometer, measuring quietly in words Sat, 17 Oct 2009 20:51:29 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: beeskiffle http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/03/14/three-rings/#comment-227 beeskiffle Thu, 16 Oct 2008 18:02:43 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=41#comment-227 Artpredator, If you look closely you will see that I have used full stops to make my gaps. I find wordpress formatting frustrating as to me the spaces say more than the words themselves. Thank you for reading my nonsense. Bee Artpredator,
If you look closely you will see that I have used full stops to make my gaps. I find wordpress formatting frustrating as to me the spaces say more than the words themselves.
Thank you for reading my nonsense. Bee

]]> By: artpredator http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/03/14/three-rings/#comment-226 artpredator Thu, 16 Oct 2008 16:15:43 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=41#comment-226 love your voice and your use of white space here and in other places masterful revision clarifies the voices, the content the conflict how do you indent on a wp blog anyway?? love your voice and your use of white space here and in other places

masterful revision clarifies the voices, the content the conflict

how do you indent on a wp blog anyway??

]]> By: rick mobbs http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/03/14/three-rings/#comment-163 rick mobbs Tue, 01 Apr 2008 04:38:39 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=41#comment-163 these are so wonderfully beautiful. these are so wonderfully beautiful.

]]> By: enigma http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/03/14/three-rings/#comment-158 enigma Thu, 27 Mar 2008 09:39:13 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=41#comment-158 i dont comment here much, as to be honest i feel overawed by the words that are here....and words from me dont seem to be able to adequetly describe the dancing, painful beauty in your writing. i dont comment here much, as to be honest i feel overawed by the words that are here….and words from me dont seem to be able to adequetly describe the dancing, painful beauty in your writing.

]]> By: rick mobbs http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/03/14/three-rings/#comment-151 rick mobbs Mon, 24 Mar 2008 07:30:05 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=41#comment-151 visiting by way of gingatao. will be back for more. great stuff. visiting by way of gingatao. will be back for more. great stuff.

]]> By: wherenothingissacred http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/03/14/three-rings/#comment-150 wherenothingissacred Sun, 23 Mar 2008 14:50:58 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=41#comment-150 This is amazing. If I wasn't human too it might seem nonsensical, but this is what we are and what we do. I love your skill with dialogue. It's upsetting to read but still wonderful. Sorry this isn't a very good review. This is amazing.
If I wasn’t human too it might seem nonsensical, but this is what we are and what we do.
I love your skill with dialogue.

It’s upsetting to read but still wonderful.
Sorry this isn’t a very good review.

]]> By: beeskiffle http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/03/14/three-rings/#comment-149 beeskiffle Sun, 16 Mar 2008 23:00:15 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=41#comment-149 thank you, jo thank you, jo

]]> By: johemmant http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/03/14/three-rings/#comment-148 johemmant Sun, 16 Mar 2008 20:47:02 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=41#comment-148 How each piece you write is better than the last astonishes me, particularly in this case. I don't know a sufficiently strong adjective to leave....... How each piece you write is better than the last astonishes me, particularly in this case. I don’t know a sufficiently strong adjective to leave…….

]]> By: beeskiffle http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/03/14/three-rings/#comment-146 beeskiffle Sat, 15 Mar 2008 09:07:21 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=41#comment-146 ((((((((((((((hug)))))))))))))))))))) ((((((((((((((hug))))))))))))))))))))

]]> By: Paul http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/2008/03/14/three-rings/#comment-145 Paul Sat, 15 Mar 2008 00:45:47 +0000 http://beeskiffle.wordpress.com/?p=41#comment-145 I was blown away with the last version but this is cleaner and has more smiling and distance? maybe, less confronting but still as powerful, like one ring out from the last one maybe, a neater timeline but still containing an everything possible of a something and so on, ie awestruck, left babbling nonsense in the wake of your writing/magic/wondrousebbyishnessperfectionwords, I was blown away with the last version but this is cleaner and has more smiling and distance? maybe, less confronting but still as powerful, like one ring out from the last one maybe, a neater timeline but still containing an everything possible of a something and so on, ie awestruck, left babbling nonsense in the wake of your writing/magic/wondrousebbyishnessperfectionwords,

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